Monday, November 23, 2009

about my father

will Italk about my dad .
He is very Famous Only for me!
He is the greatest father in the father world .He is not hard with we , his children ,He is a not harsh in his laws, He is very cool,He does not get sad from me in any time , any where,He is work as a maneger of BER ALWALDIN COMPANY with my uncle salah. He is works hardly to get us mony,moreover he is very happy, I lovemy dad very much.
WILL!!!THAT IS MY DAD :-l
I LOVE HIM VERY MUCH!!!

1 comment:

  1. Hoda,
    Your father is lucky to have a smart girl like you. I wish my daughter will be proud of her father one day., just like you:-). My regards to him.
    You need to re-edit your post to do the following:
    1.Check capitalization, punctuation and spaces between words and sentences.
    2. Re-write the words in capitals. This is informal and it tells others that you are shouting. Do you remember what I told about "Netiquette" in class last year?
    Good luck,
    Teacher Hala

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